An echo-
And it turns to an ache
A shiver-
That didn't exist...
I don't exist
I only breathe and live
With the marble
That recreates life
And replaces it.
I won't be here tomorrow,
If you're curious to know.
I never wake up the same.
Neither do you,
Just so you're aware.
Every day you lick your lips
With the satisfaction of waking up-
You're deceived.
No miracle lives
In the movement of the eyelids
As they greet the day that
Is as false as you or me.
No atonement is necessary
For sins that do not breathe.
Pay no homage to invisibility-
Slavery is yesterday.
Please scoff, I beg you,
Because you believe these words
Even less than the pen
That sheds them does,
and for that,
Tomorrow, with your words of self manipulation,
You will be the same-
Watching the marble
As it doesn't watch you.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow,this is different and unique.I like it.Good luck on the contes
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ah-mah-zing
all i can say its just great. -
an echo is a great beginning the last line is a dynamite ending the title is OK this is a very good 2 line set:"No atonement is necessary
For sins that do not breathe." thanks for sharing regards zaj



