Lying quietly within chambers
as daybreak actuate senses
flourished gardens arise
be-speckled with words
swinging in open sky
from a heaven that truly is.
Radiant as sun aglow
with universe and symphony
humming to all. 'Tis inside
the notes, jeweled with spirit.
Floating amongst avid mind
awaiting release to:
lips, paper and time.
Author notes
Prompt: Poetry Is...
A contest entry
- Poetry Is... by Everwind Rising.
1800 points, ended December 22, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the imagery here. Especially "jeweled with spirit."
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this piece is absolutely fabulous!!!
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thank you darling!
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This is beautiful; serene in both language and imagery, I loved this. Wonderful
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I jsut love the ephemereal feeling to this...and the last lines..oh my, gorgeous images come from this.
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Well done! All these things do lie within the poets notes. From mind to paper to mind. Only a true poet could express the feeling so well.
Love,
Amera♥
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this piece is stunning!
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Thank you so much...:-)
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