The girl is silent
She sits in the dark corner
She is full of love
Author notes
A haiku written on inspiration.
A contest entry
- Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
Comments
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An interesting picutre you have painted with this poem. It makes the reader think.
John -
The girl is silent
She sits in the dark corner
She is full of love
Thank you for entering my kuy contest. Love can change a person, but sometimes it is for the better.
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