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Limbo

Drowning in ink
That just won’t stick to paper anymore
Emotions are trapped
Without a spicket of release

Maybe if it weren’t limbo
That I’m feeling,
Maybe there’d be better words.

Author notes

i want to feel...something.

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  • MysticalRayne
    December 11, 2007

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    very nicely put......... wonderful use of imagery.... With so little words you spoke so much emotion. Good luck