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God of Bad Choices

I am the God of bad choices,
all my decisions shout in voices,
in numbers too large to count,
all my mistakes amount,
to nothing more than broken promises
and broken dreams
from which I gleam
a distanced glory.

A contest entry

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  • lilacgold
    January 11, 2008

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    Short, sweet and easy to read. I like it! As an insatiable pedant, I will point out your misspelling - it's 'amount' not 'ammount'.

    Best of luck!