Silent tears are wept,
Joyful memories kept.
Longing for a sense of direction,
Sick of all the re-dos and corrections.
Wishing I knew what to do,
Wishing I wasnt missing you.
So many problems I would normally turn to you to solve,
Kind of wishing life would just fade away or dissolve.
Trying to think, trying to make it,
While watching all the others fake it.
Remembering that you can really help me now,
Wishing and dreaming i was with you some how.
Author notes
#9
A contest entry
- Options!!!!!! by Falling.Again...Xx.
330 points, ended December 11, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really liked this but i found it was kind of bulky at points. but still, really good write.
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wow this is an amazing write kiddo which holds alot within it. the words powerfully penned. well done and best of luck
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That was great! I knew it was love from the start. You rhymed well. I loved the point of this poem and you stated it well. I can't really think of anything else to say. Good luck in my contest!
-Summer Moonstone -
I was a bit confused, but then i figuredit out, it was an awesome poem, I loved, best of luck in her contest, she can be brutal.
Best of luck and keep writing,
Annie Shadows
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