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A Rainbow's Secret

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After the pain has subsided and all of the tears,
have fell from your beautiful blue eyes.
Know that a rainbow of happiness will come,
to embrace and help you in your time of despair.
Believe in it and let it sweep you away.
Know that you have nothing to fear for,
your life is just about to begin my friend.
You have no reason to run and hide from this force of nature.

You will be taken to another place and time,
where all of your problems and sorrows will disappear.
For every rainbow holds a special secret for all of us.
One that can transform our lives for the better.

 

 

 

 

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  • islekine gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    This is well penned....

    and congrats on the silver....after all the tears have fallen.....is correct and that line bugs the heck out of me! lol...Thanks for entering!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 11, 2007

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    blue eyes crying no that is never good...I believe in rainbows too brother. I am running on one right now! lol love you bunches ~sissy~ congrats on the shiny


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    Awww My Friend, this is just so beautiful and great message, love the picture.
    You have done a wonderful job, as always

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • penman gold member
    December 10, 2007
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    Excellent

    What a great poem for the contest. Congratulations on your silver.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    This is a very very nice takeon the prompt thank you for your entry good luck to you in the contest best wishes and much love


  • Stickboy
    December 10, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwww beautiful poem bro, and so true best of luck to you in this contest thanks for sharing


  • In Too Deep1
    December 10, 2007

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    A very inspirational and well penned take on the prompt my friend. You are truly a word smith and your anvil the pen. I have enjoyed this writ and wish you the best in the comp

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