Shambles are all
That remains of me
Feelings of nothing
Not anymore
Do I deserve it?
Or something else?
Now I’ll never know
What I meant to you
Just a nothing
What is left of me
Is torn and frayed
You will never understand
How I ended up
This way in pieces
Of a broken love
And this shambled heart
Once stood
Between love and hate
Now nothing big
Just a small me
Crushed
Everyday
Standing
Over me
Every time
Leaving nothing
Except this me
In pieces
Author notes
whatever666
A contest entry
- Make me feel dark and emotional. Lots of options!! by Kia Tenshi.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
option #3 - Shatter
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I really enjoyed how the lines were short and simple. It leaves lots of room to think of the possibilities of the poem.
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