Virgin Mary had a kid,
Who's Dad was from above,
Christ our Saviour born today,
He fills the earth with love.
Author notes
Not sure if this one will help me get back into a rhythm. I can hope.
A contest entry
- Four Line of Christmas by Lj-.
300 points, ended December 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well i like it very much, very simple and innocent and i hope you get your rhythm back good luck and keep me posted , dont forget you rock
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No, not true. But at least it rhymes
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HOODWINKED!!!
the title aptly suits this poem. an old story modernized! great job with this! thank you for sharing. you are talented. keep writing! God bless you always
you have been hoodwinked by the poetic bandits!
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Hoodwinked
Hehehehe this was really cute and it is a catchy rhtme. I hope you did well in the contest. You been hoodwinked by a poetic bandit. -
HOODWINKED !
You speak the truth with child-like mirth, something we should all aspire to. You will find the Love waiting for you when you least expect it. Well Done!
You have been Hoodwinked by the poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis
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You have been HOOD WINKED by the Poetic Bandits. This is your day in the spotlight. Enjoy. YEs, you could certainly write many verses using the aaba rhyme scheme. Works well here in this single verse. Keep writing like this and your rhyme will be just fine. Liked the sentiments behind this short poem.
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Nice write.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck.
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