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Christmas Memories

Filled with memories of the past,
Their kindly shadows o'er our lives cast
And how sweet to reminisce,
Of a past time, a hug, a kiss!

Of special Mem'ries, Christmas excels,
Of happy times and "Silver Bells"
Of wintry,yet such heart warming time,
Of Families sharing, and friendships kind.

A Tree to shelter festive, wrapped gifts,
With hopes spawned, the spirit lifts
Yuletide greetings fill the air,
To spread abroad it's Christmas cheer!

Families near and brought together,
Braving cold and snowy weather
Filling the air with sumptuous breezes,
Of pine, and pumpkin--the scent that pleases.

O that most festive Holiday,
"Deck the Halls"--what a grand display!
Adding to it's mesmeric splendor,
In our mind remains a warm, bright glimmer!

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  • He Is My Lighthouse
    December 16, 2007
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    This is very beautiful, Well written, good luck in the contest.


  • Marshall013004
    December 16, 2007

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    wow so sweet !!!this reminds me of my contest i am hosting right now . you might like it . but back to your poem . wonderful indeed. i enjoyed the memories it brought to mind and the ones that are yet to come . thanks for sharing .


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    December 13, 2007

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    Very Nice

    Yet another heart warming poem from a poet with the true spirit of Christmas. I love how well your poem flows and the wording through out rocks as well. I also just really like how you just let yourself go and the flow is killerly good. any ways you have touched us all with these graceful words and also your big heart. keep on penning away and Merry Christmas and a Happy New year to ya again. Good Luck in the contest! Take care.
    Sincerely, Paul


  • The Madman silver member
    December 13, 2007

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    Vry nicely done here. You have captured a very traditional Christmas season of all we do and share with one another and done it well in this pen. Thank you for sharing,

    Evan


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 13, 2007

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    this is beautifully written with imagery and strong words that really create the christmas effect. well done


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    December 12, 2007
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    great work!
    best of luck

    Tasha


  • Denierim
    December 12, 2007

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    Wuah! I love Christmas poems and this is the very reason why! So pretty and uplifting, showing all the gentle glory of Christmas. It's one of my favorite times of year because you get to be together with your family and just celebrate in the warmth of their precense. I love that. Now I can't wait for Christmas...

    Beautiful beautiful work!


  • seamaiden
    December 12, 2007

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    Such lovely Christmas thoughts you have here. I love the closeness of family and friends shared in this season and throughout the year. Beautiful images I got from your words that flowed so soft and smooth. The rhyming was delightful. Thank you for sharing with me. Merry Christmas and good luck in the contest. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥


  • Kari gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    fallalalalalalala lol very well done on this, really brings you in the christmas mood and the best of luck in the contest


  • Ephiphany
    December 11, 2007

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    awww...I love this Poet

    very well penned so glad you were nominated for viewing...very well done and full of Holiday Cheer.

    Happy Holidays,
    ephiphany


  • Justusdreams
    December 11, 2007

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    How could you not be filled with the christmas spirit, look where you live! Good to see people still excited about christmas. The poem is lovely most of all I could feel the good feeling you were talking about as I was reading. Thanks for sharing.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    Wonderful work here!
    Thanks a lot for sharing this lovely
    Christmas piece with us all. Well
    done and good luck to you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • warrior-eagle
    December 11, 2007

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    Yuletide greetings fill the air,
    To spread abroad it's Christmas cheer

    Very chrimastine..not a word Hehe.
    anyways very happy poem you wrote here.
    great work.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • LadyShiva
    December 11, 2007

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    A beautiful christmas poem! You did this well, Christmas is a time of loving and giving and I think that you captured that in this piece! Great Write!

    Lauren


  • daviscth silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    This is such a warm hearted Christmas poem and I just love the picture you used with it. Thank you so much for posting in my contest. Merry Christmas and all the best luck at judging, Cathy

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