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Beautiful Blinding Snow

Oh,
Beautiful blinding snow,
Frosting on thy window.

Oh,
Violent falling sleet.
Blind me with your white - blue hue.

Frosted in my frozen stare.
The crystal color of ice stays in my eye.
When summer comes,
This memory,
Like a faded ohotograph,
Will come back in sepia.

While the blizzard starts,
So does the art
Of painting,
Oh wonderful painter,
Capture me a moment worth millions.

Oh
Beautiful blinding snow.
Frosting on my window.

Author notes

It sucks, I know THIS. Hey, at least you didn't get the emo one where 'red overlaps with white'.
Eck.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 15, 2007
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    If it sucks, why should I read it? (shrugs).
    But I don't think it did.


  • jaykayXD
    December 11, 2007
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    awesome. hell yeah.

    haha, my poetry should bih.