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answers still so vague

As we stand here
staring into each others eyes
the feeling that there could be more between us grows

then we think of the future
we lean into each other and hug
then in a split second as we kiss it turns to something more

as we kiss we fall to floor
then we wonder will this love be restrained to this or something more

when we lay on the floor in our mad dance of love
we find the answer but it is still so vague

Then as we lay against each other will we still ponder
was this right or wrong no we wont

Even though miles of land separate us
it feels as if you are right beside me
now I ask is it the same for you



 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 18, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'Day mate

    Powerful write bubbling over with love and intimacy.
    Passionate and strong.

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • scenario five
    December 10, 2007

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    ^^ I loved this when you first sent it to me.
    & now the more times I read it, the more I love it.

    :] hehehe. loved it.
    & im 'cited that you finally gots an AP account! ^^ yay!

    -Jenn