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Evil...


Even in those last final moments
Virgins blood was our aphrodisiac
Intoxicating these darkest desires
Leading us to her lovely sacrifice

Mutilating her sweet virgin flesh
Organs displayed for our viewing

Reciting the next satanic verse
Each taking turns to violate her

The pink flesh now ripped to shreds
Her body desiccated for pleasure
Another soul sacrificed for Satan
Naked carcass death fucked by all

 

Entrails smeared on each other

Virgins blood mixed in the urine

Intestines burst open with shit

Lunch is now served to master

 

 

Author notes

2) Devil- OK pure evil! Meaning murder or satanic thoughts. Anything sinful

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  • thenorthernstar
    August 11, 2008
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    pretty good I like it thanks for entering


  • Venus25
    July 31, 2008
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    Raw

    Whoa....love the imagery

    Ver well done


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 24, 2008

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    Yeah truly this type of person is the ultimate evil, taking the life of those innocent and those who can't stand up for themselves, simply to deliver a duty that really shouldn't be valid, shouldn't be allowed and if we could stop it. Indeed, grotesque.


  • xXnotXbrokenXx
    February 12, 2008
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    wow. this made me almost throw up but its good. really good.


    • Timespell
      February 13, 2008
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      hehehe..

      Yes, this is not a poem for the EASILY OFFENDED...LOL

      Thanks for reading and commenting on this one.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Dragon Tamer
    January 14, 2008

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    Shockingly Satanic!

    WOW
    This is scary good!This would make an awesome sci-fi thriller to watchYou have drawn quite the grotesque satanic offering.The last line would do just about any sane person in....but then I'm still writingThank you for sharing your dark side with us and best of luck in the contest!
    DT


    • Timespell
      January 14, 2008
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      LOL!!

      Thanks for that... I think this is a pretty dark to say the least...hehehe

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • SchizoChic
    January 14, 2008
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    Wow. I really like this. It flows well and the imagery is incredible.

    • Timespell
      January 14, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting, I might had that it is an Acrostic poem as well. Just in case you never saw it.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    Thank you very much for your wonderful entry. Very well penned indeed. Best of luck in my contest and a very Happy New Year!


  • georgie
    December 19, 2007

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    wow!!! and i mean WOW!!! reminds me of a piece i did with venus blue a long time ago... very dark and gory. i definitely would have given you more than an honourable winner for this piece but tis still a great reward either way. looking forward to reading more along the same vein... in more ways than one,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx

    • Timespell
      December 19, 2007
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      Thanks Georgio

      Thanks for reading and leaving a fine comment!!Glad you like this twisted bit of poetry. I have done a few along these lines. I suppose the nearest one to this one...would be Lord of the flies.

      Thanks for reading

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • hommie-t
    December 15, 2007
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    this is amazing!! sex.. blood... satan... totally awesome! it was a pleasure reading


    • Timespell
      December 17, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting... Glad you liked it, thanks for the HM...

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • CCSUNSHINE x
    December 14, 2007

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    this was amazing

    Mutilating her sweet virgin flesh
    Organs displayed for our viewing
    Reciting the next satanic verse

    I love gore and you displayed an amazing picture here.


    • Timespell
      December 14, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on this Dark poem.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • CherryOnTop
    December 11, 2007
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    This is a good one!!!My kind of gore.


    • Timespell
      December 12, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting on this rather Dark bit of Gore!!

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Sensual Sapphire
    December 11, 2007

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    Your first stanza is the best. Descriptive and somewhat demented in it's seeming calm. People can overlook the gross factor but when it is presented in a way that shows no emotions for the victim, that is when the true horror begins. Well done.

    • Timespell
      December 12, 2007
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      This sort of stuff went on in the olden days thats for sure. There are still plenty of cults around that practice dark magic etc. But I don't think they'd get away with this sort of stuff now!!

      Thanks for reading.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    December 10, 2007

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    O.O

    HOLY FUCKIN HELL!!!!
    IS IT WRONG IF THIS FUCKIN TURNED ME ON????
    I DON'T CARE, THIS IS AMAZING........AA HHAHA, mutilation, that's sadistic yet makes me orgasm!!!

    FUCKIN UBER AMOUNTS OF KUDOS AND BEYOND!!!!!!!!!

    • Timespell
      December 11, 2007
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      LOL..... Sacrifices apparently still go on in the world. Not documented on, because of the twisted people behind the rituals.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~

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