I liked you with all my heart
But you couldn't care less
I would lie down for you to trod
And you did so without looking back.
I thought you were him, my first
But I guess that couldn't be.
More pain to instill
In my already broken heart.
My heart still bleeding,
My soul still yearning,
I walk through out the day
Broken every way.
A contest entry
- A Moment in Time (contest by sinnastarr) by Sinnastarr.
590 points, ended December 31, 2007, 39 entries
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Comments
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First off, I found this poem very hard to read. The background overpowered it. After I finally managed to read it I found it to be quite a sad work. It read fast, witch I liked.
Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
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aw, hun. Sometimes it feels like love isn't even worth looking for. Wonderfully written
*hugs*
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