Devilish delights, tail in air, come visit euphoriA
Expect horned pleasures within these gates of heaveN
Velvet vices gripping his cock, pleasing and strokinG
Invitation to my lair, snared by passionate desirE
Let loose orgasms, earthshattering... honey I'm no angeL
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Adult by Riftkin.
625 points, ended December 10, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely done!
Congreadz on the trophy! first off, your title hooked me in because of your title i had to see what this was about! after i read your poem once i smiled! Now, i am not sure if this was a bit of humor or what, but i have herd that before...lol. not sure if it was after or during sex! anywho, great poem! loved it! -
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Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm
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Might not be an Angel
But you sure know how to
make the screen fog over with your words
and to add a little humor into it
this is pure magick
Riftkin -
Oh, you go, girl!
A little angel mixed with the devil; kinda sounds like me
Love this piece, hon!
Well done! -
Wonderful imagery here..Love the double acrostics idea!
All the best!
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velvet vices. That's quite an image. I like the double acrostic. This must have taken a bit of doing. And I agree that we are both angels and devils like Lucifer.
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honey I'm no angeL
I loved that line...great write, good luck in the contest.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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HAHA no angel indeed this is great
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The last four words caught me off guard,
this is a steamy write with a sense of humor.
love it.
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