A princess lost in her own kingdom,
no crown is placed upon her head,
no luxury she does get,
only the wet pillows from tears on her bed,
she has bruises and scars on her body,
from all the times shes been kicked around,
all the tears she has cried,
enough to make all her enemy's drown,
she cries and weeps,
here on this floor,
in her black and white world full of hatred and pain,
as her family hits her again and again,
with depression and bulimia,
she starves and cuts,
people say shes phyco,
say shes going nuts,
but this insane princess,
is craving love,
but she only gets her uncle standing above,
demanding her to let him have his way,
to fuck her, and all she can do is hold her tears back till hes away,
then when he goes,
she screams and cries,
she thinks of her family in which her despise,
will anybody save her,
bring the colors back into her life,
as right now she lifts her knife,
to her wrist and slices away,
mutilating her skin,
till her head does spin,
then she passes out,
no regret, no remorse,
that insane princess,
her life has run its final course.
Author notes
the picture of the girl looking out the window,
thats me no stealing,
this is how i feel at the moment,
its a poem on my life,
love Elektra
tell me what you think? love you all
Comments
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omfg the picture of you is so damn sexy!!!!!!!!! oh yeah..good poem too
mylee -
broke my heart
this emotion soaked write flows like a waterfall
love it the depths of depravity show clear here.. bravo
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very sad, but I am sure, the survivor in you encourages us to also survive this lowly appendage and seek you for help, if need be. Very much a suspence write.
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oh and that's a very good picture...I personally would hav etaht as my display...but that's just me
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wow...well written poem, but I have to say it makes aperson worry about you even a person that you scare with your poetry sometimes....
~*~Lauren~*~ -
A princess lost in her own kingdom,
no crown is placed upon her head,
no luxury she does get,
only the wet pillows from tears on her bed,
she has bruises and scars on her body,
from all the times shes been kicked around,
all the tears she has cried,
enough to make all her enemy's drown,
she cries and weeps,
here on this floor,
she thinks of her family in which her despise,
will anybody save her,
bring the colors back into her life,
as right now she lifts her knife,
to her wrist and slices away,
mutilating her skin,
till her head does spin,
then she passes out,
no regret, no remorse,
that insane princess,
her life has run its final course.this is a sad but true poem about the sadness of ongiong abuse I can relate to some of your words from my heart it takes along time but the past does not eqaul the future love maralisa xx
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This is the first of your work I have read and I think it's wonderfully written. You are truly gifted.
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I understand completely sweety, you should read my poem ' She was the chosen one ' I think you'll find we have alot in common. Brilliant write, truly emotional on so many levels. This hits home.
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Oh wow ow ow jeezis this is - heartwrenching, and I've never meant it more than I do right now... You poor poor girl, this dark spun world is chaotic and rancid, and to think that you, with all your good heart, must be trapped in such a world is torment just to know; I can only nightmare what it must be like for you...
I mean not to spread pity, but ... a mild, semi-understanding of your pain... I can express nothing else...
--is deeply saddened--
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that poor princess, i hope u can find peace & i hope ur uncle rotts in his lonely grave for wat he did to u. its so sad, it made my eyeliner smear from the tears. sry to hear about the pain u'v been through. Also its a beautifull write & draws a picture of wat ur trying to say. love ur work its really awesome.
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Rot indeed he shall - these words you've written speak the truth...
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this is a really sad poem and very painful i am so sorry that your uncle did this to you. i hope he is rotting in hell if he's dead or in jail if he's alive
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this poem was great it shows some pain from the past that you lived and i understand about 100% of what you went through its just that i couldnt tell you because you wouldnt believe me but this poem was great and thanks for sharing
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Shocking and sad. And makes me upset and want to do something. Grrrr you really brought out some intense emotions here!
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wow this is amazing
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this poem is very goood, one of the best poems i ever read.....
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great
this poem is great, its so descripotive and i know how that feels. I cant express my emotions in poems as well as you. Its excellent, I loved the whole thing. z i love the layout and background to. goes very well with the poem.
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Amazing
I would like to say
This poem was amazing
You write with such intense talent
I enjoyed reading it
Though it made me sad
But sadness is a good emotion
It brings out our hearts feelings
And it looks like you have done that
Succesfully I might add
I am here if you need to talk
Though you dont know me
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Elektra love I am here and will remain so. YOu are loved by me and he loves you as well you know who I speak of the one that has many loves. He will hold us both closely in love. *kisses you softly* Never doubt that I am here. for here i will remain.
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Painful. Alluring. Magical.
I will read up on your work - I'm entranced by the "insane princess".
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i really like it its real nice and well i even picture it on my head, anyways i read alot so i always draw pictures on my head
i really like it!!!!
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i love it!! it's amazing!! you did great!! keep writin
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This is really deep. THe way you describe it is absolutely vivid and heartrending. My hat's off to you for being able to create something like this. Dark yet subtle in a very dramatic way. Keep it up.
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no matter what, you'll always be my princess of darkness. in my kingdom you would find peace, pleasure, and serenity.
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Wow
Such deep abstract images really make this poem of yours come alive. Kudos on your picture posted above even though your looking out the window the reflection seems to show how you feel. any ways with that being said its amazing how much crap and $hit you have endured and well you are alive & kickin rightfully do. I always felt that the past is the past & well it can either haunt you for the rest of your life or it can help you become a stronger person. in my case it helped me develop into a stronger individual and well I don't take as much abuse now. any ways wonderful poem sad becaus eof all you went through but brilliantly done. 
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wow.
The imagery was perfect. It was like a beautiful story that kept my intrest all the way through. This is very lovely, your thoughts keep me wondering what else you have in your delicate mind.
I enjoyed this greatly, very well writen. Hope to see more
~Brooklyn
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nice. i like the way that you put imagry in this piece and i think tht you did really good. i liked the part at the end i think it was really good.nice job and keep writing
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this is great. i know the feeling, and i can't wait to get out. the only difference, is my uncle wasn't doing it, my mother's dad was. i don't call him my grandfather, even though by all legality, he is, but to me, he's nothing. and noone in my family knows about it, because they all call me a liar, except my uncle. his own son has been turned against him. and all because of me. he's the only one in my family tyhat cares. and now that they're all moving closer to him, they expect me to go, but i'm staying right here. great write. i loved it.
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After going through sometime like this, it's excruciatingly hard to continue on. I'm so sorry hun! There are people in this world, believe it or not, who do care though. It's just really tough to find them. This poem exemplifies pain, heartache and agonizing emotion and you did an excellent job of expressing it. The imagery is powerful and gripped me with each word. I hope you find a way to heal! Never stop writing dear, let the words flow!
~Elizabeth~
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honey this si soooooooo sad -
Sharp
Its very real, and the way it is written cuts like a knife would. The style fits the poem. Plus, the pictures really work with it.
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Beautifully wicked
Heartwrenching my friend this wretched thing that is life at times but I truly beleive in the old school saying "that which does not kill me only make me stronger" such demons you have to slay but much valor is in your heart, you are strong and fearless though you may at times feeling that bewildering mix of fear and rage, that beast will sooth itself soon. a princess you may not be but your crown is in your heart, your strength in your mind. afterall that is the makings of a queen... Queen Elektra.. my courageous friend... -
wow, this is harsh and dark, too real for me it's my own life and I can't read anymore of your work because it's so upsetting for me, you are a good writer but your poetry causes pain.
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wow thats really ice
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Elektra this poem yells the truth of hurt, pain, abuse in so many artistic ways. your life was so hard and should have never happened but now because of it you show everybody that the world and the minds of people are not butterflies and rainbows but sick and disgusting. i lv it.
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awesome!
Honestly, this is an awesome poem , By your words you can see the raw emotion and her pain. Thanx 4 sharing. -
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Thank u
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Oh hun, this was written with such pain.. i'm so sorry.. I know what it's like, I'm not saying that understand what you are going through because everyone goes through stuff differently.. But I know...anyway this was painful to read but very well written. The image you made with your words are a strong one hun..
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Wow,
A very powerful piece that screams to be read, and for the angels above to make everything OK. If it were that easy.. Life surely brings so much pain, and I feel so bad you have had to endure such agony. Here's sending ya much love and respect. Healing hugs as well.
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Very intense....i like it!
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i love sad poems because i relate to them. when i read them it makes me feel better knowing rhat im not the only one who's hurting.
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wow i couldn't even imagine, i have nothing to say but i'm glad you have made it this far, yur very pretty too
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thats intense, love it though! sad... cool name
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i love it... such a cute yet sad poam
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now im not gonna be one of the people acting like the no what your going through and its hard to say keep your head up when shit like this happends but your a very beautiful girl who has a bad run the only thing anyone can say is keep on running. Beautiful poem
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im feelin it
that poor little princess locked ina tower
held captive by fear feeling no power
her heart it must break with each coming dawn
her only escape wen her uncle is gone
they dont have the love the love that she needs
shes empty inside thats why her wrists bleed
the love that she seeks can only come from within
dont give up princess your destin to win
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thts really deep great poem ur beautiful dont let anyone tell u something else!!!! i love the way u wrote this "A princess lost in her own kingdom,
no crown is placed upon her head,
no luxury she does get,"
bailey
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Ur a beautiful girl
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wow
that is a really emotional thing uve got goin on there...
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it is deep and sad, even more so because I actually know people who have went through this and it is so terrifying and hard to get through.. Good work portraying the feelings
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Wow this is a great poem... I'm not into the whole cutting thing but I have written on poem like this, but this one just kept my attention and drew me in.. I really liked this one.. and thank you for your comment.. a friend of mine helped me right my poem you commented on.... we were bored and it gave us something to do and that is what two head came up with lol... but Keep up the great work.. and Blessed be!
Lady Rhiannon Raven
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WOW
I have to say that is extremely powerful stuff. Most of what I compose is showing how I feel in relation to situations either within my own life or those who are close to me. I have relations and friends who can more closely relate. You say that this is how you feel, do you achieve the release you are seeking?, or is it the drip of a painkiller that must be replenished. Awesome stuff.
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wow...this was amazing. beautiful and it flowed very nicely. beautiful pic also. simply amazing. awesome job.
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you are prettiful.
And this was a sad poem,
and I assume true?
And even if it is then I hope that one day you stop cutting,that one day you actually do come to Jesus' feet and wish you the best! God Bless you hun and great write!
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I love you. Your amazing and i love your work!
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sad how this world is
abusers should be locked away on an island surrounded with bars for the rest of their lives just put them away from all and let them live in prison togeather
see who gets abused there the strongest would
then take the weaker of those abusersand then they would know the same feeling reap what they sow what you think of this idea.
sorry your life was tragic
but to cut ones self
to me shows that
they were or are in such pain on the inside that by cuting theirselves they take away the inside pain
to me i feel that this then creates many problems
as they allow their wounded soul and heart to not only hurt inside but show its face on the outside as well
and in my opion
also shows that one doesnt want to deal with life and lifes harsh realities
this is just my opion
now for your poem you wrote it as you felt it
and you wrote it so well
i like this poem as a whole no parts better than another
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wow hun this is an amazing poem and the meaning and thought you put in are truly amazing my favorite part is the last line it is just ana amazing way to end such a strong poem .you have done a great job at putting the way you feel in to words and down in ink it takes great talent and the title is amazing i really enjoy reading your poems
they make me read them more than once they make me sad you feel that way but keep writing and be happy xxxxxxxxxx
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This is a beautifully penned poem. You've done a great job, and it's truly haunting. I am so sorry you feel this way sweetie... and I really hope things get better for you. *HUGS* Keep your chin up, and keep writing for it will always help. A great poem, I love it!
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very good. i really felt your pain through this. i loved it
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haunting
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im soo proud of you!!! you look beautiful in your picture and this poem reminds me of how i feel...its amazing
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this is really really good....i loved it... its what i feel all the time
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u poor thing
Im sorry u hav so much happening 2 u. i no wat its lik to hav ur family beat u so if u ever need some1 to talk 2 il always b here 4 u. And as for the poem it was sad and beautiful.
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Nice piece. It was a little long and tedious for my tastes, and there wasn't the intensity that I was hoping for, but it was still well-written
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Beautiful penned write! some excellent lines in there also;
enough to make all her enemy's drown and but this insane princess,is craving love
Hard thing to write about but u did a brilliant job, i felt every word
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It's always hard or painful to write about such a subject and the pain never fails to reach the reader. I have nothing but respect for people that are brave enough to be able to put something like this in writing.
Regardless of the situation though remember that you always have a choice. Nobody especially not you, are defenceless.
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"all the tears she has cried,
enough to make all her enemy's drown," loved these lines. a very deep poem. beautifully penned. painfully read. hope things get better.
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Awwww hun! It sucks that you feel like this, and the people beating on you... I've told you before, no one deserves to be abused, especially not a friend of mine, so you need to stop sitting back and taking it... I'm not asking you... I'm TELLING you... to get help. It's your right to be safe and happy, and this is not what I'm seeing. If I ever get ahold of the person responsible for this, I will punch him/her right in the mouth!
... Anyway, that's my rant. A good right, though such unfortunate circumstances that brought it on. Keep writing... You'll find it helps! And you know that I'm always here for you.
Much love always
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