Creepin through ya' body like the grinch who stole life
is my addictive ingredient, NICOTINE,
till your blood runs cold as ice
so try me ONCE, try me twice
now you're addicted and resistance takes one hell of a fight
so try as you might
with all your might to quit me
even if you DO manage to drop the habit
I've still taken portions of your life WITH me.
I'm an assassin manufatured and distributed across the world
and NOW my bosses are advertising me to little BOYS and little GIRLS
I find it pretty disgusting how I help you kill your self
I take your life when you KISS my BUTT
and you feel GOOD when you DO IT, umph, you smokers need help.
I'm you're addiction (slash), killer (Slash), personal stylist
do you like the fragrance I give you? Lasts longer and stays permanent does it?
You like the new tone I added to your teeth and fingers?
Don't the yellow on them make you look so prurrdy? (pretty)
Any your BREATH, oooh I LOVE the smell of my BUTT upon your breath and lips
no one ELSE does but AYE, them hata's need to get a grip
all you need is us, so don't even trip
when the physically pure turn their nose up at you
I'm all you need, my NICOTINE is the answer
just me, you and our precious baby... LUNG CANCER!!!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, this was really very creative. I've never really understood why people smoked. You spend thousands of dollars a year on these death sticks, that can give you cancer. And they're so dangerous that they can give people who don't even smoke cancer! But they're still legal. I find smoking to be disgusting, in my opinion and I think you captured the aspect of it well. Great write.
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I liked this!
I thought it was very intriguing and serious yet funny. Keep Writing! 
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Haha even though this is serious it was funny. I like how you wrote from the object's point of view. Great write.
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So true so true
My sister and I are hell bent on quitting and doing very well. I am having a harder time because my husband wont quit but I am determined to stop burning my money and killing myself . Thankyou I think if you dont mine I want to put this on my refrigerator for an extra boost. This is great
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