Almond nut and cinnamon
toothy words kept cautious
by sweet lips stall
of things she’s seen
and where she’s been
released to a fist and let fly
when sky is wide blue smile
Author notes
prompt: photograph provided by contest holder
7 lines
In a list
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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by the way, i just love the title of this too
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wow, wow, wow, nothing about this i didn't like. this is one for both the senses and emotions love these lines....
"Almond nut and cinnamon
toothy words kept cautious"
"released to a fist and let fly
when sky is wide blue smile"
thanks for your wonderful entry and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Beautiful..Made me smile....
All the best!
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fabulous title
beautiful imagery & inspired writing -- especially the last two lines...
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so beautiful..and brings into light some sad things for me again...
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Love the last two lines of this poem - they fit this picture perfectly yet adds a deeper dimension to it too. Aah yes, the things our lips have known and seen....!
~ Nicolette
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