By no command of mine
nor prayer
it spins new strands
connected to cells
like sticky web
with Mother
thank God
Author notes
Prompt: INNER STRENGTH
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt 16 entries 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended December 10, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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where do you come up with such marvelous metaphors. They pour out of your fingers like water from a sieve! Always every poem, a masterpiece! Best wishes!
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ty email friend....and you ahe an email waiting.
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Lovely meatphor! Wonderful show of strength in few words.
Great thought and read.
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ty pen friend.
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Nice
I really love "connected to cells like sticky web.." simple yet is all... -
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ty pen friend. I appreciate your stopping by.
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