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A Joyful Noise - Gold

Missing image



Iceberg rocking restlessly
in coldest place on earth
splintered
while knocking
against my heart:
I am left, holding
miniature joyful jewels





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  • Desire gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: A Joyful Noise
    Oh My Me Oh My~~ Love the beginning line
    and the last clencher:
    I am left, holding
    miniature joyful jewels...

    Powerful message You have brought forth~
    This is the second piece which got me balling
    like a baby
    Your images took me there to experience
    but more Your energy which grabbed me...
    I wanted to cry...it is strange
    for I felt sadness
    like when this was written...
    not because of the words...
    but the feeling is bringing tears...
    that is grabbing at me...
    If that makes any sense...
    Beautifully penned
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and voice!


    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Judging will be done shortly~~
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      December 12, 2007
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      aw, thank you my friend...you know, when the great weight of sadness finally braks down..there is joy to be found...this I know..and it took many times before I knew it.


  • anaisnais
    December 10, 2007
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    Lovely verse captured well!