You are the air
that I breathe
my light in the dark
a warm summer breeze
my desire, my spark
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You are the ocean
that flows through
my veins so deep
with each ebb and flow
you make my heart beat
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There is no mountain too high
no river too deep
that I would not conquer
for your love to keep
A contest entry
- I Need Some Pick Me Ups by di ivers.
600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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MR. TOAD has had quite an influence on you! LOL!
Some things (if not all things) are better said in the simple words that are heart and soul speaks to us in, Darling - and this GOLD TROPHY WINNER demonstates that quite beautifully, Sugar! Congrats on another shiny GOLD TROPHY that was well deserved and THANK YOU so much for sharing this with me on a lazy Friday night as i've accompished much today and in the last 13 days and I think I'll just rest for a day or two! We shall see, Mrs. Toad!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Mrs Toad, is in such a mushy mood LOL!!!
Oh dear me. Glad you enjoyed it.
We will see if you rest or not.
Always a pleasure to have you visit
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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some people may say this is everyday ordinary writing but this is something that i truly enjoy thank you so much for entering this into my contest and the best of luck to you....
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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The air, the Oceans, climbing mountains, what next? Must be true love, I think...
I love you,
Brazos
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Just thoughts on love
always pleased to see you B
Love ~sugar~
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Wow....this is lovely sis
a different feel with this one, and I love it
keep writing, you are so very good in this genre...much love always here for you...
Piff
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Cheers sis
I love reading your comments
& 
to you sis
~sugar~
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Lovely
This is just lovely. These are the same feelings that I have for my beloved Jammi. "You are the ocean that flows through my veins so deep, with each ebb and flow you make my heart beat." So very cool.
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Cheers Jaime for reading
glad you enjoyed this and thank you for inspiring me
your sis
~sugar~
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Beautiful writing here. Full of emotion of the reasons why that person is what this piece describes. Wonderful writing. It flows very well indeed.
Love always
Wayne
xx
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Cheers hun
always a pleasure to have you breeze across my page
Love
~sugar~xx
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