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Where is the love? What is love?

where is the love?
what is love?
i thought that i liked you...
i thought that after you moved
i would finally be over you...
but yet you come back!
where is the love?
what is love?
what happened to
what we had before you left
for the first time?
i thought that i liked  you then...
what am i feeling now?
i don't know what i am feeling!?!
after what he had before...
after what we have now...
yet still you leave?!?
God, O God please give me the help
needed to figure this love out...
where is the love?
what is love?
will you come back?
or will you stay away...
never to return...
to pick up where we leave off...
where is the love?
what is love?
i guess for you...
if you never return...
i have to say "adieu"
but i know in my heart of hearts
that i don't want to...
God, O God please give me the help
needed to figure this love out...
where is the love?
what is love?
the love is here in...
my heart waiting for you!
you can accept it
or you can deny it...
the choice is yours,
but you choose the first...
but i want,
you to feel happy,
you will probally never read this...
so again i ask:
God, O God please give me the help
needed to figure this love out!!!!

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  • AKA Tainted Love
    December 18, 2007
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    thats deep!

    wow girly!! it's deep and i like that!! good job!


  • moluv10
    December 10, 2007
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    This is a nice, emotional piece! I love the repeating phrases. Great job.


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    December 10, 2007

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    Mmm...
    I like it! The emotion in it is great and its overall a good write!

    Muahs!
    Luv ya!

    Natalie