Where are you going
little girl?
you are running
spinning, tumbling
remembering all the mistakes you have ever made.
Where do you come from
beautiful angel?
you are floating,
flying, falling
from heaven, but I was here to catch you today.
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me a critical thought.
Comments
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Neat interpretation of the picture served up to inspire writers in this contest. LIked the questioning approach you used here. Beautiful angel is indented, was that on purpose?
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I did intend the indent. I think it reveals the girl as an angel even more so. glad you liked it. Cheers
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this certainly brought a smile to my face that widened as i read each line. yes, little girl in a big world constantly changing and rearranging with growth. i love the "running, spinning, tumbling, floating, flying, falling" very descriptive and full of imagery. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Superb Siah! ^_^ I love your work, this is such a beautiful piece! I'm quite impressed with this one, I like the imagery you included in these few lines. XD I love the thought of an angel falling, and then someone like you to catch her, that's pretty much amazing. 
Love you! Thanks for sharing this and keep up the friggin awesome work kk? 
~Elizabeth~
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