beaten chamfered land
hunger devastates.
asphalts receive blood
roll downhill.
mountain ranges, devour,
green from history,
waters dying
everlasting pollution
shown people.
religion, politics...
badly contaminates.
education in cheque,
drugs consuming
youth adrift
prostitution devastating children.
experiences stayed unaware
raising monsters...
change of time,
earthquake, tidal wave, storm...
destroyed nations
servants of nothing,
without identity, people ghost.
sowed temples
belief!
shepherds vampires
planet earth
lost sphere.
Author notes
This is also hellish..horrible,brutal.. but may be not of your taste.
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i believe that this is a good start to something that can evolve into something that could be very brutal. nice start
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