In my life its been hard
Its like an up hill struggle all the way
You face one fear and then another hits you down
like life doesnt want you to win.
I believe that one day
i will succeed in what i wanna do .
to be strong and willing.
loving and passionate.
with no boundries ,
just trust.
In my life its been a strain .
From one thing to another.
From people leaving this earth
to newborns arriving
But will all my problems and heartache
i wouldnt leave this earth for nothing
my family and friends said im a fighter
and i going to prove them right
i am never going to give up .
even when there is no hope .
I believe one day there will be luck in my life
just waiting for the right day .
Author notes
I would like to say . I have seen alot of things that make my life hell . But i have always got trust and i believe that tomorrow is another day .
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this is a wonderful uplifting and inspiring poem, i too have faced much inhappiness in my life and like yourself i was determined to be strong, now i can tell you that i am a mother and grandmother and have seen many of my dreams come true, all because i too had inner strength and determination to keep on fighting against everything life threw at me.
each hurdle we have to climb in life helps us to grow stronger, keep fighting,one day it will all be worth it. i too come from the uk by the way,i live in wales
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Inspiring. I liked the line "Just waiting forthe right day" nice job.
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great inspiration here. Full of hope for the rest of us. Nicely writen.
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even when there is no hope .
I believe one day there will be luck in my life
just waiting for the right day .
Well this is what the life is ..and we all have to do bleive in the positiveness of the acts..I love the approach of this verse..wonderful entry.. well done...
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