The spirals ever downward
With the flakes all around
Their cheer and laughter
Makes my heart sink and drown
This sorrow I have comes from seeing them ill
Oh let them be oh winters chill
The lights and strings
And all these happy things
Make my heart sink deeper
From looking a the drunkem man in the mirror
This child I locked away
He fights for his someday
Christmas is happy but why
Why do we fight
The screaming and raceing is killing this birthday
Of our God and the way
Cocaine white snow and icy trees
Make me oh set me free
I'll do anything to be happy
On this christmas eve
Suddenly she appeared to me as a shadow
Of in the distance through the snow
She screams
Screams please help me
The flames are rising from the wreckage
The child screams save mommy
As I reached through the broken carnage
I saw an angel behind me
Taking me away to a better day
Maybe all these beautiful deeds saved me
At least mommy will see her baby girl for another day
I died this christmas eve
But only to make others happy
Author notes
Well I have a better one in another contest for christmas. This ones not as good. Also all you myspacers out there my band is having a christmas giveaway on merch and stuff all you have to do is 1) add the band(RegardsToYesturday) 2) read the first to comments by me in the blog titled lonely night. 3) you get free stuff. Help me help you this christmas. Love you all happy christmas
A contest entry
- Calling All Christmas Posts by daviscth.
450 points, ended December 20, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark poetry by cutekitten789.
800 points, ended December 11, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this alot.. it was a good write.
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Cocaine white snow and icy trees
Make me oh set me free
this is the best line ive ever heard about x-mas -
Wow!! This is filled with imagery. I liked what you done with it. Thanks for posting in my contest and all the best at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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soooo amazing! im speechless. lol
xo
kandy -
wow...I like this...a good spin on what a depressing christmas must be like...I had a christmas like this last year...depressing as hell
well good job and good luck in the contest
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