is it a
dream
or a
memory?
calm
and confusion
chaos
and stillness
come together
harmony and discord
blending
mixing
blurring perfectly;
talent and
emotion
rising
flowing
e x p a n d i n g
into something
golden;
angry and wild;
manic
d a n g e r o u s ;
be careful.
but do you hear it now?
this delicious connection
beautiful belonging
fuck judgment
exclusion
fear
this moment
suspended in a jar
full of blood and loneliness
released
by a scream
and the ultimate question:
"ARE YOU MOTHERFUCKERS READY TO BE EATEN ALIVE!?"
Author notes
Written December 8, 2007 for Corey fucking Taylor's birthday.
First line from "Wait & Bleed," and last line, I'm not sure, but I've heard it somewhere before.
A contest entry
- For my favorites and those that have me on their favorites by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended December 11, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love this and I love how raw it is. I really like the way you've written this and the descriptions that you've used. Great job doll.
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An exciting and intelligent piece of work!!!
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Transcend All
I'm a huge fan of this style - forward in your face emotion. It's inspiring and colorful, it's poetry at it's best - raw!
Groovy Piece!
Namaste'
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