I know the peace in your poems;
I feel the tranquil joy,
I treasure each moment of
soft words and soulful image
in your quiet metaphor.
You have the book of future
for your magic quill-
I pray that
God grants unceasing comfort,
a muse that always yields
word treasures on the golden path,
of your poetic fields.
In a list
A contest entry
- Allpoetry: If you know MargaretG please enter. by Lyndon.
1780 points, ended December 17, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lyrical vers libre is an art
and your contribution for Margaret's milestone is highly regarded by me. Perhaps "magic quill" is a bit hackneyed. The rest is fine verse indeed. Such a poem of peace and ending with a benedictory prayer!
Thank you Richard, for your contribution. Ron.
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Simple and sincere... And the free verse is well handled and sings... which is not always easy to achieve.
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Prayerfully said, and very likely to come true.
Prolific as she is, her poetry is like a World Tour, and the sonnet form flawlessly used. Much more to say, but she says it better!
Terry -
A lovely poem for Margaret's special day. Her poetry is just as you described it-comforting and oh so good, she is a gem among us.
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Margaret is indeed a POET, real and very talented poet. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to her, Richard I've come to know her through her poetry and group activities and she is truly a treasure
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Blessed
That is sometimes true!
Thank you for your benediction, Richard, I hope that your blessing will bear fruit and poems of love and peace will multiply on my pages. Your words are gentle and give me a warm happiness.
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Outstanding poem that resounds in joy and peace! Also enjoy the celebration of a poet and her poetry--this poem makes me curious and I will look up her poetry! Good luck in the contest!
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