you're looking at me as if i'm dirt
a bit of nastiness, a stain of a being
having been too young to be a parent
accusing my presence of atrophying your life
you of all should comprehend
why i won't become your mirror image
or allow you to erupt into irresponsibility
but somehow i wish for no self-imposed chains
In a list
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
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this is very sad yet powerful. after reading the comment below mine, i take it this is very personal write and i do hope things are better for you today
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Hard hitting
certainly sad since having read your profile this feel like a statement you're making to people how should have been there and done anything to show you love, and they failed miserably.very good piece even though the subject is sad.
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