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unfinished....

I see the pain in your eyes,
Though you think you have a disguise.
I have been through this trial,
And can see you are in denial.
I can offer the help that is needed,
But it simply goes unheeded.

I long for you to live free
But I cannot get you to agree
I want to show you the way,
Why won't you listen to what I say?

I love you this much is clear,
I say it with every shed tear.
I beg you to tell the truth
But you're afraid because of your youth.





i am so passionate about what i'm feeling i can't get the words to come. Any suggestion?

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