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when the walls fall...

when the walls around my heart crumble, and fall,
i'll have nothing left to protect it from the pain.
when the walls around me crumble and fall,
i'll have nothing left to protect me...
protect me from the words, getting hurt
i built these walls to keep people out
and keep me inside and alone...
i built these walls high and strong for years
but how did you get by them?
how are you the only person to tear down these walls?
how did you get to me?
i saw you on the first day
and from that moment..
my walls started coming down.
i knew they would fall someday
but i thought i'd take them down myself
i never thought you'd come along and push them...
you helped me take them away
you made mw smile when i couldn't
you made me look at myslef in the mirror
when i couldn't stand to see me!
you helped me with everything
all i have to say...
is thank you! for everything!

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 2, 2008

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    I think this was definately my favourite from you, very well written, thought provoking, brilliant !


    *walls
    *me
    *myself


  • Polkadot Cadaver
    December 18, 2007
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    pretty good

    A good piece of writin..I like the way you worded everything