We sit by the window
Looking at the skies
I lay my hand in your lap
You lay your hand upon mine
Looking from the window
You kiss me with hunger
I return the kiss and hunger
The kiss ends
We remove our clothing
Standing by the window naked
We return to the kiss
You caress my back
Then move to my chest
You're gentle with me
Making me feel like porcelain
I move closer to you
I rake your back with my nails
You arch and moan at that
Dragging my nails around to your chest
I never break the skin
You grab my hands making me stop
Kissing me with that hunger still
You move us down to the floor
No longer viewable from the window
Slowly you move your lips
From my lips to my neck
You then release my hands
I move them gently downward
Grabbing what has become stiff
I start to guide you in me
You stop the kisses then
And finish what I started
You plunge into me hard
No longer treating me like porcelain
I groan at the sudden change
I run my hands over your back
Finding the right spot
I make you go harder
You comply with the action
Making me quiver and quake
You don't stop the pace
Harder and faster you go
I start to pant with the roughness
You start to shake and moan
Your shakes become almost violent
You start to orgasm and I soon follow
You collapse on top of me
You're still shaking and I'm still quivering
Soon you remove yourself
I yelp at the sudden removal
You lay beside me and kiss me gently
We stop and sit up
We put on our bottoms
You sit against the wall and look out the window
Running my hand through my hair
I place my hand back in your lap
I begin to look for my shirt
Author notes
I thought that it would be different to end it with some humor.
A contest entry
- Afternoon Delight by Brazos.
3500 points, ended December 14, 2007, 25 entries
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Be honest and tell me what you think.
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Very erotic eh!
This is a very erotic piece and perhaps something that
almost all of us have experience or will some day?!
Thanks for sharing with us
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BY the way, I also want to THANK YOU for your
comment on one of my poems!!
I am quite new on allpoetry and it's nice to get
a "feedback" from other poets.
Have a wonderful weekend!!
May light anf joy be always with
you
Cheers,
Fernanda Freire
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Nice take on the picture and the balance of the read flowed well...thanks so much for entering our contest......novy
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Great Job
You put the picture in motion, and ended it perfectly.
Thanks so much for entering our contest.
Brazos -
i like the last stanza
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Great ending!! This was a highly erotic and intense piece full of tatalizing imagery... content. Afternoon delight indeed!!
Thankyou for sharing
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