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Puppy Love

Does he think I'm pretty
does he even care?
Could it be he's noticed me
or is he not aware?

Does he look at me with pity
thinks I've not a prayer,
or looks at me, sees that we
could make a loving pair?

He's advancing itty-bitty
my insides start to flare.....

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  • HeavenScent4U
    December 20, 2007

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    this is kind of cute, especially the last two lines great rhyming here too thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed