Still wondering what the next move is going to be,
I know how long its been going on,
Should I still care the least little bit,
After all your putting me through,
All this time you really didn't care did you,
So now look me in the eyes,
Tell me you really love and care about me,
Also tell me that your through with her,
Swear to me you will never do it again,
Just look me in the eyes and tell me, I really wanna know.
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this seems like a common theme in a lot of poetry these days. i guess i can see where it kind of applies to the picture as in the young lady talking to someone who treated her bad. i love the repetition of "look me in the eyes" it worked here
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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nice very emotional i can tell it was written from the heart
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Interesting
well it is a very interesting poem and it makes sense but then again I was slightly lost at to where you were taking this poem from the image. oh well. any ways nice work all round though and keep up the good work and Good Luck
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This is really good sweety goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much love
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This really reminds me of a lot of the stuff I wrote a few years ago. Good job. Good luck in the contest!
~Perfectly Ruined~
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OMG This topic is getting on my damn nerves... BUT it's a good write. Apart from a few grammatical issues, all is good. Best of luck in the contest.
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Bandaid.
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