Meet the Lord of the seas, Captain Pilver,
Who looks a bit tacky in all his silver,
He’s the archenemy of heroic Pirate King Pete,
The yin to his yang, his cruel antithesis,
Like Cervantes he has a grand white tash,
Pilver is known as the silver slash flash,
Vicious and bad like another fiend hook,
‘cept more intelligent for he has read many more a’ book,
Very well matched with Pete his arch foe,
As well as themselves, each other they know,
Brothers they be, guess it goes to show,
Adventuring the sea, one on dark, the other on light quest,
Their crews leave them to duel for who is the best,
Ahoy to Pete, and I must raise my grog to Pilver.
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He’s the archenemy of heroic Pirate King Pete,
The yin to his yang, his cruel antithesis,
-rhyme is awkward there, but I like those lines-
woot! again, great piece! Good name choices
Keep it up!
pegleg
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rhyme? i didnt put rhyme there lol
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its slant rhyme, i guess, sorta kinda
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I am impressed
However I must run, so I will have to book mark this good fellow.
tt4n
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thank u- i was thinking i really need to add more poems- i have a fair few i am proud of tlike this lol
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I wish i had an archenemy...... but alas, I don't. Another good write.... I lkie the intertwining story between the 2 poems. Very nice.
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thank u i like that perspective- i mite write more
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