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The Chase

Winter's breath kissed the darkness
Mist rising as heat met ice
He turned, she smiled
Their love this plan's device

A whispered word, the night grew
Swelling, enfolding, complete
He stopped, she gasped
Two widened eyes set out to meet

A silent plea to keep ahead
Message conveyed by lover's gaze
He nodded, she sighed
And they continued through this maze

Unexpected, undirected
More footfalls upon the snowy ground
He roared, she sobbed
Their destination never found

Author notes

Random midnight thing that came to me. Haven't written in a very long while. Maybe I'll expand on it later.

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  • Desire gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Well if this is random than bring on more
    Wonderful piece with many images...
    especially with More footfalls upon the snowy ground~~

    Love the line: Winter's breath kissed the darkness

    I'm Happy to see that quill dancing!
    Hope You are doing well
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~