From frigid sidelines,
she cheers on the yellow orb
fighting northern blasts
having witnessed moons
in December's arena
box old man winter
the next contender
favored to beat all her blues
old fashioned Christmas
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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funny that you would write even in metaphor about winter to this image because we moved to So Cal from Ohio 3 years ago and my daughter misses every aspect of winter, as do i
i especially love the last stanza here. job well done thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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poetic
Color and metaphore weave in and out like rainbows of this image ...original ..
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Loved it, very well written. I really liked the subject matter also.
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