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Moving on

Missing image

I wonder what you're thinking about,
as you sit all alone in that chair.
You're always so preoccupied with something,
it makes me wonder if you even care.
I have been waiting for you for hours.
I guess it's best if I just leave.
You aren't even making any effort,
to talk and get to know me at all.
I wish I never accepted your offer to be here.
Good-bye and take care, my heart has to move on.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    December 20, 2007

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    contemplative and i think if the thoughts behind this were real in her life that she would have made the best decision possible by this write thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • capricornpoet
    December 10, 2007

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    sensitive

    Moody prose as one whose wondering what goes on in that images heart that made another beat to its rhyme..
    good luck in contest..lovely and a little sad..


  • crimsondew
    December 10, 2007
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    Good observation...like it..All the best!