A night full of tossing thoughts,
morning crept on me unawares,
I ready myself
still in the night's shell.
I step out,
surprised
by the warm greeting of the sun,
melting my thoughts away
to make room for life.
Author notes
Picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Image Inspired #18 by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very reflective and positive
i especially loved the last line thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Thank you...
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spontaneous
This little reflection poem was sparkling, was fitting of this pensive image.genial.A winner...
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Thanks a lot of rcapturing the image in my poem.
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Very nice take on the prompt you do so well with these thank you for sharing this with me best wishes and much love
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Thanks a lot dear....
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Great take of the prompt dear i couldnt do that one
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Thank you, but do not worry, you have some fabulous poems that could not think of....
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