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Realize

Lost Sister
Dead Father
Depressed Mother
Left Alone
She Was...

Cold
Sorrow Crept in
Beneath the Vacant Expression
No Luster in those Hazel moons
There Was No...

Life
Sudden Burst of Realization
Love Found
Pain Gone
Comfort Given
in a Large Calloused Hand

*sigh* Hello Father

Author notes

Second poem...More about realization than anything, the random thoughts will keep coming, don't worry!

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  • wonderbandalice
    December 10, 2007

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    I love the second to last line. Not the blank one. The one with words on it. Ha ha. But yeah, nice work.

    It's "mildly nice" ha ha ha.