Swirled in purple satin sheets,
this other life for me completes.
Holding each other as one,
and the night has just begun.
He pulls my body closer now,
knowing his touch I will allow.
Tender lips on mine,
send chills up my spine.
His finger tips graze,
along my candle lit face,
and then begin to wander
further down yonder.
Soft touches on me caress,
touching my nipples and on my breast.
As his mouth starts to move down,
his fingers enter me moving all around.
Soft strokes fill this dripping stream,
as my body now starts to cream.
While he nibbles, kiss, and licks
I firmly but gently grab on his dick.
Stroking each other with a quickening feel,
releasing soften moans we can not conceal.
Undressing one another with lightening speed
assuring ones satisfaction guaranteed.
Now he's on top I feel him steady,
this is it now, let's get ready.
A sigh of pleasure as I feel him inside,
muscles tighten with every inching slide.
pelvis' trusting harder and faster,
I'm your slave, be my master?
Fuck me like you mean it, tell me I'm yours,
I wanna feel you deep inside my core.
Unable to control this tingling sensation,
he turns on and up the acceleration.
Harder and harder his thrusting it gets,
Oh My God, my body's so wet.
Can't control this feeling thats come,
as both in sync we start to cum.
Embracing each other so gently but strong,
not wanting to move, this is where we belong.
Sleep sinks into our senses and we are at peace,
dreaming this night will never cease.
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I like this, Nice flow. i think it's getting warm in here...**
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Very sexy,and great imagetry..too great
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OH me oh my, this is so bloody hot...im on fire
I loved --
Soft touches on me caress,
touching my nipples and on my breast.
As his mouth starts to move down,
his fingers enter me moving all around.
Soft strokes fill this dripping stream,
as my body now starts to cream.
While he nibbles, kiss, and licks
I firmly but gently grab on his dick.
you built it well and gave us a great explosion with some sensuality and love there t the end too
Cindy
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I love it...is it getting hot in here or is just me...lol.
Great write, very erotic.
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Thank you for for entering thhis amazing poem in my contest and thank for following my rules, by inclcuding thee words you used, well apprecated.
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Ok the out line of this pieces is good. The sense of emotion, and what is happening well done. But you go back and forth with rhyme and free write. Pick one or the other when you write like this, it throws the whole poem off when read outloud. Other then that a very creative little read. Good luck.
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you were right i did like this one you are amazingly good at writing erotic poetry. have you ever won any erotic contests. if not you were scammed. but wow this is another one of those that heats up the room as you read deeper and deeper into the poem. excellent writting. keep it up, i look forward to your next one.
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this is very very very good. thank you for entering it into my contest.. you did exactly what i asked for...
best of luck,
love behind bars28
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Thsi was great i agree.Not hardcore but i still enjoyed it. <<| F.list.|>>
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BREATH-TAKING!!!!
THIS WAS AMAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZINGGGG!!! HONESTLY!!!!, BRILLIANT!!!! YOURE LOVE POEMS ARE SO FAR THE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!, GREAT!!! -
Dayum Miss Happy, im sittin here horny now! i didnt know u could write like that. where did that come from? whoaa thats hot!
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