As cold and naked as the arms held aloft
I slowly wandered through your avenue
Whilst the misty rain was grey, it's touch was soft
But the sky above you held no tinge of blue
Stripped of all your beauty by the bitter winter burn
You seem to hold such empathy for me
And I pray that when the mellow days return
I will feel the warmth that spring will bring the tree
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful poem.
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Leanne, you have been so quiet. That has been our loss. You still have it though, I'll take what I can get. --- Thank you.
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great
hey woman you remember me..starshine... remember me and tazz... well we broke up a couple years ago... but we both have started over... anyways... awesome poem like aways... your still my favorite poet on here... merry christmas to you and yours....marti ( star )
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Leanne, it’s been so long. Merry Christmas and all the best for the New Year. I hope you are well
xx
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deep and lovely at the same time great flow and grand imagery you have brought forth much emotions I was wanting to judge this contest tonight but I think this quickie has turned into a slowie hahah but if not tonight I will judge in morning and thank you for entering
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