Tightly wrapped
So The blood won't drip
Cutting away...
[It's a murder weapon ]
Suffocating organic matter
Slowly flesh withers away
She made it through the night with him
But he
Dead he lay
Plastic wrap never looked so lovely
A contest entry
- she made his heart out of plastic wrap by sweetpearl.
340 points, ended December 25, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I don't think I can say much more than that.
i like the shortness and bittersweettity of it, and gosh, i want to hug that plasticwrap/bodybag so much!
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Aww, thanks for reading! glad you liked it!
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