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Beneath friendships rain.

The Soundtrack for Beaches 1988, Staring Bette Midler.

Tracklist :
01 Under the Boardwalk
02 Wind Beneath My Wings
03 I've Still Got My Health
04 I Think it's Going to Rain Today
05 Otto Titsling
06 I Know You By Heart
07 Glory of Love
08 Baby Mine
09 Oh, Industry!
10 The Friendship Theme



Beneath friendships rain.


I think it’s going to rain today
I can almost smell it in the air. Suddenly
homeless men scamper under the boardwalk,
in the park across the street.
Trying for shelter, using what little they have.
One man Otto Titsling stays out on the field
he was drunkenly trying to dance the rain away.

The broken heart in my chest takes me back
to recent memories. My lover is gone, giving me the friendship theme only unsympathetic goodbye.
Never again, to be, ‘Baby mine, all mine’. I thought always “I know you by heart; you’re the wind beneath my wings”.
I ache knowing you have rejected our connection

Oh, industry of love and your tormenting games. 

I am old and alone with not even a friend.
Repeating nightmares
that taunt and mentally scar me.
I shudder
Shed a tear once more,
my whole body aches, as all my faith is lost.
How do I accept the glory of love is gone?
Again, afraid to sleep and thinking
Why waste time with telling myself ‘keep your chin up’ or ‘I’ve still got my health”.

Rain sheets down creating a loud performance
of noises on the old tin roof.
My tears come fast and heavy and produce
a flood of their own.

I must dig deep
Somehow, find the strength
to be comfortably alone.


Author notes

I have taken each song title from Beaches, Movie with Bette Midler Soundtrack and incorporated them into the poem above

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  • oktiggerknowsbest
    December 18, 2007

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    Fantastic!

    I like how you incorporated the songlist before your poem. I like how everything ebbed and flowed together. I enjoyed how you described what was going on and the feelings, the use of all the senses for that matter. I am speechless. Keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest.


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      December 18, 2007
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      fantastic

      Why thank you, I was worried I wouldnt pull this one off at the start but by the end product was so so so happy LOL

      Thank you for your well wishes, they are ,much appreciated


  • Venugopal gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    A nice poem cindy. What a talent hides in you.You atr a meteorologist, hydrologist, lover, caring person, all at a same time. A marvellous girl are you! Glad to find you in A.P. The poem confirms all compliments.

  • Venugopal gold member
    December 10, 2007
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    Waiting to hear through your poem. make it sweet for all of us to relish and enjoy 'Cindy'Let great flow takes your mind and heart.

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