Watch The Clock
Tick Tock
Watch The Lies
Tick Tock
Every Foot Step
Tick Tock
Hear Every Word
Tick Tock
And The Lies Continue
Watch A Still Pond
Silence
Listen To The Truth
Silence
Every True Promise
Silence
And The Lies Continue
Trust Your Footing
And You Fall
Trust What You Know
And You Fall
Trust What You Hear
And You Fall
Trust What They Say
And You Fall
And The Lies Continue
Watch The Clock
Tick Tock
Time Doesn’t Stop
Listen To A Still Pond
Silence
When You Get Stabbed In The Back
Trust Your Footing
And You Fall
A contest entry
- No place to put it..... by Menace.
2250 points, ended December 11, 2007, 32 entries
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Comments
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I'm not a fan of the ending. Seems abrupt and doesn't tie it up as much as I would like. The rest of the poem is excellent and a rare style to see.
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