I want a few things under the tree
A camera a toothbrush one CD
A gift card a car an MP3
Not to big don't you agree
I don't want too much
And I don't want too little
I think it is just right
But how will it all fit under the tree????
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- Tell Me Your Christmas Wish List! by Princess Peach.
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Comments
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all those stuff can fit under the tree, except the car i think

"...I don't want too little" <----my absolutely most favourite line of all
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Lol... got a kick out of this one! Best wishes and I hope you get your wishes!
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Awww this is quite cute

I very much enjoyed this piece
Thank you for sharing and good luck to you, hon! -
Funny.
That's cute, you want a car but "Not to big don't you agree" that was cute, great read, thanks for the laugh.
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Very good, I want a lot for Christmas too so I know. Sometimes I feel guilty about asking for a lot b/c I have a sib.! Good luck and thanks for entering!
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