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Cracked - HM

Missing image

Lips remember, I know,
by tingle and need to brush
my fingertips across them

a slick memory
I must learn to put
my own fist to

I can not bear lick
of my own tongue
to see if I can still taste you there

between the cracks


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  • tara wilson gold member
    December 11, 2007

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    "I can not bear lick
    of my own tongue
    to see if I can still taste you there"

    sigh...beautiful..god, this is so sadly beautiful...I love this..


  • michael thomas gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Nice answer with the words.