she moves without effort
she knows her work well
each piece has a wondrous
story to tell
what she makes so lovely
had started so plain
with each thing she makes
she releases disdain
her art is her life
she knows no other way
it tells who she is
and what she has to say
A contest entry
- 10 - 10 by CarolDesjarlais.
525 points, ended December 9, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice write. Would have been curious to know more specific details, but based on the limitations of the prompt I guess that was not possible, and it's a piece that many can relate to. Nice write.
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well done... what exactly is she doing? This is a great line:
what she makes so lovely
had started so plain
it just fits perfectly into the story.
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this almost gave me a feeling of the tea ceremony..nicely done.
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