Warm whispers falling from her lips like snow,
she presses her lips
to the glass [cold as ice]
leaving impressions for all
to feel.
Struggling through stark white emotions
&& crystalized veins
with no heartbeat
to be discovered,
she reflects the stars
in the cool of night...
reminding us it is always winter.
Raptured in existence
[only by blue butterflies]
with wings of garland tips,
she awaits the day that spring
will suffice her to slumber.
A crossed out creation
confined by mythical consumption,
her soul surrendering to the solace
of January's child
[long-suffering the sadness of December]
Author notes
Option #2~ surrender to
I actually had this written already, but it seems to fit well here.
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me feel dark and emotional. Lots of options!! by Kia Tenshi.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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emotional... i love it.
wow... i really like this it's cold and has a lot of talent. i can tell that you are very talented so keep it up and have a great cold ice princess christmas.
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I liked this imagery you portrayed...made me feel cold. Nice write.
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This is a piece that I spent some time reading over and over, allowing my mind to connect with the meaning behind these words. Filled with so many beautiful lines.....
Struggling through stark white emotions....
Raptured in existence.....
confined by mythical consumption......
and such a perfect ending:
her soul surrendering to the solace
of January's child
[long-suffering the sadness of December]
Wow! Stunning images and and wonderful flow....The kind of verses you want to repeat over and over and say out loud. Thanks for a fantastic read. :-)
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