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Sky Search

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Searching sky for signs

of God, perhaps, or simply Spring

or you

curving wings to cradle sky
and swift return

to earth
to land
to me

sweet wing soft pull
away from
what you may desire more

than this gray sky
offered

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  • Kari gold member
    December 10, 2007
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    This was nice! Best of luck in the contest


  • michael thomas gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    You just turn such delightful phrases into lovely thoughts.


  • aboomer silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    Beautiful wording, so soft and peaceful.
    Very lovely.
    Good luck in your contest.